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Image size
4928x3264px 4.82 MB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D5100
Shutter Speed
10/2500 second
Aperture
F/8.0
Focal Length
28 mm
ISO Speed
140
Date Taken
Jan 6, 2014, 12:28:59 PM
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:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Very nice! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/> I definitely love the pose and the outfit and everything! I think what really appeals in the photo is the lipstick, because it's comparably the brightest subject in the entire portrait!

Now, here's the critique, overall the picture is incredible, especially the quality and the style of this portrait, but the only two things that seem to catch my eye is the section underneath the zipper and the hair. For the sipper part, you can see that there's an open patch of bare skin, and I think it sort of throws off the image, because it really seems like the only thing that should be exposed is the face <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt=":p" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="394" title=":p (Lick)"/> however, it'd be great if you can shoot the entire torso as well, to sort of extend that portion, or just trim it out, to avoid it being a bit of a distraction. The other tiny part that also catches my eye is the hair. Nothing wrong with it, but on the left shoulder, it seems like the single strands of hair jutting out on the letter kind of gets in the way. Understandably, it's not easy to try to omit those buggers out, but it would also impact the picture alot more.

And that's about it! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/> Overall this was a great portrait! Please bear in mind, this is my first critique!